Critique: I would hang this on my wall

Another-WorldNot one but two professional photographers, Swapan Mukherjee and Deborah Anderson, were drawn to this stunning photograph that they would “never tire of looking at”.

 


They explain to Fotoflock what makes this photo so special and how it could be made even better.

Swapan Mukherjee is, in his own words, “a veteran” amongst the leading photographers of India. An immensely talented photographer, his work spans all genres, from food to art! “Curiosity” and “the urge to create” are what drive his passion for photography. Here are his comments on the photo “Another World”.

The image, “Another World”, by Partha Pal is a fine example of pictorial photography at its traditional best. It is indeed another world that we are looking at in this age of jet travel, computers and instant communication around the world.

All the elements in this amazing image beautifully fall into place. The low afternoon sunlight, the shapes of the clouds, the positioning of the bullock cart, and even the apt title make it into a stunning photograph that I would never tire of looking at.

The line of flow of the clouds, the long winding almost desolate road and even the patch of grass at bottom right hand corner all help to draw the viewer’s attention to the cart. The winding road tells us that the bullocks and their driver have a long way to go before sundown; a familiar story in rural India.

Looking at the metadata, one sees that the colour space used was sRGB, and the exposure was set at one-third of a stop under, which has resulted in the loss of shadow details. This could also be the result of losing details while converting the image from colour to black & white, if it is not performed carefully. However, I think the black & white version certainly has more impact and drama than perhaps the original sRGB colour version, if that is how it was shot.

In-camera conversion to black & white is very limiting. Having started my professional career as a black & white printer in various design studios and advertising agencies in London, I am simply amazed at the quality one can achieve by digital post-processing an original colour image into black & white using Photoshop. Hence, if time permits, I rarely use the in-camera black & white setting.

All things considered I still think Partha’s image is a great shot. It gives me the urge to lose myself in rural India with a camera soon.

Photographer and singer-songwriter Deborah Anderson is famous for her sensual photography which captures her subjects, including A-list celebrities, at their most intimate. Her debut solo album, “Silence”, which is accompanied by fine art photography from her book “Paperthin”, will be released on May 12th. Like Swapan, she was drawn to “Another World”.

This photograph immediately drew me in. The contours of the clouds in the sky and the shadow details on the Ox drawn cart are strong in contrast. This photo tells a story and gives a sense of journey with a timelessness. The subjects are beautifully framed whilst the light is powerful and adds a wonderful dimension to the landscape as well as the wheels of the cart. I would hang this on my wall...

Swapan’s Website | Swapan’s interview | Deborah’s Website | Deborah’s interview | Photo by Partha Pal | Fotoflock Gallery

 

 

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Critique: A beautiful yet contradictory place

In the second of his photo critiques, photographer and entertainer Chip Simons picks out a selection of photos which celebrate the craft, and the emotion, of photography.


 

Suraj Matthew

 

Photo by Suraj Matthew

 

Other images I picked have something to do with the "craft" of photography ... they are better quality, which I applaud ... especially in this world that is bloated with images that were done by the camera or Photoshop and are shaky, noisy and with poor optics. What looks like a good picture often turns out to be garbage just because of the same criteria that made traditional photography better or worse. Some of the other images show me a place that I have never seen and it is obviously a very beautiful yet contradictory place to live. It has contrasts on every level: visual, psychological, and social. I like that for the reasons we have always liked photography ... it shows us something we have never seen.

 

Debashis

 

Photo by Debashis

 

I am a little bit unusual in the world of photography. I have discovered so much about who I am and how the mechanisms of taking pictures can be manipulated to express my feelings and thoughts in ever-changing ways. I am conceptual for the most part. I am a comedian and an entertainer too. This is why I reject 90% of all photography as just another photograph that looks like another photograph that looks like another photograph. It is all fine ... it is all part of a process ... and it is a recording device first and foremost ... it is a memory tool ... you don't have to be a crazy artist-like thinker. Imitating pictures that you like and getting great results makes you excited and more confident to dive deeper into the craft and the mistakes you make along the way are what lead to discoveries.

 

Santu

 

Photo by Santu

 

As I look at the images again, I still think about my original comments that "photography is more about what you don't see" than what you are being presumed to be shown.  Photography, for me, came from emotion. I went through years of crafting pictures for everyone and anyone, but now I am returning selfishly to my roots. These photos that I have chosen show that same diversity of emotion versus craft. While most of them are emotional, ironically, the most professional (and the one taken with the most expensively priced photo equipment etc.) is also the one that is nearly void of emotion and is almost purely craft. I think this should be an inspirational point for those contemplating if it is their camera ...or their mind and heart that is in need of an upgrade.

 

Other photos Chip has commented on: -

 

Rakesh Syal Rakesh Syal

N.Jagadeesh

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Rakesh Syal | Rakesh Syal | N. Jagadeesh

 

Stalin Ramesh Somenath Bakshi

Abhijit Nandi

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Stalin Ramesh | Somenath Bakshi | Abhijit Nandi

 

Debashis Debashis

 

 

 

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Debashis| Debashis

 

 

Chip Simons has been a professional photographer for more than twenty-seven years. He is known for his creative and humorous photography.


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Critique: Nice colours but needs more attitude

shailesh-kharkwalThe landscape photographer and Hasselblad winner Hans Strand offers some technical tips on how a photo of a winding wintry road could be made more dramatic.


This photograph of a winding wintry road has nice colours and a classic diagonal composition. The road enters the image nicely from the lower left corner and leads the eye into the picture. I would like to see more intimacy though. Maybe lowering the camera towards the ground or trying to find a strong element to put in the foreground. This would add some drama and attitude to the image. The way it is now, it is a bit on the "loose side". I would also have excluded the dark upper right corner, which is making the image a bit out of balance.

I can see from the settings that the photographer used a fairly low aperture number, 5, which does not allow much depth of field. For images like this one, I would use f11 to get appropriate depth of field.

To optimise the technical quality I would also have used a tripod, since the light did not allow a fast enough shutter speed for a good hand-held result.

Before venturing into landscape photography, Swedish photographer Hans Strand was an engineer. He won a Hasselblad Master Award in 2008 and was named “Digital Camera Photographer of the Year 2008” for his striking landscape photography. He has shot all over the world, from the Arctic to steaming rainforests but his favourite location is Iceland.

Hans Strand’s website |Interview with Hans Strand | Photo by Shailesh Kharkwal | Fotoflock Gallery

 

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Critique: I would like to see a little more street

Renowned photojournalist Fawzan Husain comments on a photo that he thinks is perfect for a photostory and explains how it could be improved.

street-child

 

 

This photo is very nice and would work well as a photostory of 8-10 portraits. However, as a single photo, it needs a little more background, more ambience – the frame needs to be a little looser. I can see a stony background but the frame is too tight – it could be anywhere. I’d like to see a little more street. Having said that, the apathy of the child comes out very well. The choice of black and white works well as we associate black and white with apathy and negativity but it could have worked equally well in colour.

 

Fawzan Husain is a renowned photojournalist and a fan of street photography. He specialises in editorial photography and has covered subjects as diverse as Saddam Hussein’s Presidential Referendum in 2002 and mass marriages in India. His latest project documents the tribal and folk artists of India.

Note from the photographer:
I am Ashok Shah, a Nepali national. I completed my BA in Journalism in 2008.

Here is a boy begging on the streets of Bangalore. He has no other choice than to do this everyday to feed his two-year-old sister. I happened to click this while I was returning from an inter-collegiate photo contest in March last year. And the image, its composition, theme and the time, all managed with a Kodak Easyshare 6MP digicam, my only photo-tool, is one of my best works as an aspiring photojournalist.

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Critique: Search for the human interest

babyDavid Zimmerman comments on a series of portraits by Shuva Brata Deb , picking out two which he thinks tell worthwhile stories and explaining why photographs of “happy faces” don’t interest him.



This is an interesting photograph. I enjoy the contrasts present: age and youth, experience and naivety and the more obvious elements of texture. The choice of black and white is a good one, in that this photograph could be a week old or one hundred years old. Somewhat timeless.

Your other image also has a story which is worthwhile. There is something quite "human" about the scene & the gestures.lady

Themes are important in your photography. Discover a theme that appeals to you and dive into it.

Your other images fall short of these two however. They lack a story and are more about "happy faces" and are not nearly as interesting. Search for more human interest than just smiling faces.

If you're serious about your photography please avoid shooting jpgs and sRGB whenever possible. And keep your ISO as low as practical.

Keep shooting.

David Zimmerman is known for his still life and high speed liquid images. Much sought-after for his advertising work, his clients include Pepsi Cola, Unilever, IBM and Mercedes-Benz. He also takes on landscape, environmental and documentary projects.

See the other images David has mentioned.

David's Website | See our interview with David | Photo by Shuva Brata Deb | Fotoflock Gallery


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